Personal Narrative Response

My personal narrative basically summarizes a night at my hunting camp. It reveals lots of different characters and things going on at the camp. I used some dialogue in order to try to show rather than tell the story. I believe I did a good job of accumulating a large amount of ideas. I found that as soon as I started writing I was able to have ideas flow out of my memory.

This was one of the first personal narratives that I have written for school. I found that  I really enjoyed writing it. I love writing in the present tense. It kind of allowed me to make the story flow well. I especially enjoyed incorporating voice into my writing. I feel like it was very necessary to my subject.

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